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now this was interesting. pretty impressive for a second project. i like the style, but there's still alot of room for improvement. first of you need quite alot more power, at least in some passages. your tone sometimes goes down to a whisper, which makes a pretty bad contrast to the stronger passages. you should work abit on your breathing, and fill your lungs with more air for the longer passages. not sure about your technique, but make sure you don't restrain yourself. i'd take a step away from the mic and just let it all out. also remember to never change your voice or try to sound like someone else, that always turns out bad.
the reverb is nice, keep it around that level, fits the style nicely. the timing is also good, it all flows along well to the song. they actual lyrics are pretty plain though, but they do what they're suposed to do.
all in all, this is a pretty fucking kickass performance, being only your second project. but try to get a decent distance to the mic and give the vox more power. if you find it hard, then you should perhaps concider changing your technique a bit. don't be afraid to experiment. and remember to take pauses if your throat hurts, and drink alot. it'll all come with practice. good work, keep this up and you'll be making awesome vocals in no time - the potential is there, no doubt about it \m/
netty-swobb 
