Helll yeah man
NICE work man! This is greezy stuff man@!! Keep up tha ILL Flow man.
think it's time for a new track, ain't it?
i've set my lines to pass
poisonous gas attacks
Choke up the mass
Show me what you made of
stick up some ass
you could say I made love
Fact is ya shit is fucked with when its on
shits a rubber glove
So when yall get ripped
call it a gift
Son cuz god's givin it
thank me
if you ain't feelin it
Ma bars r like water boarding
Every1's cool with it pouring
I don't kill any1 you really knew
And if I did you wouldn't know
So don't wear it
if its not ya shoe
you stepped into
Stay out of it boy,
leave just go
switch I's say review
drop a zero
prolly 2
in the end I aint a cross
no cuts to attend
nowhere near you
dude time spent
try n pretend
a wound b4 it sent
a BN to heal dead son Amen
platformer embalmer
Killin these levels
these words are the devils
say this verse is a curse
But shit never settles
So when you got shit to say
spit the other way
shit's called pay back like rentals
Helll yeah man
NICE work man! This is greezy stuff man@!! Keep up tha ILL Flow man.
thanks a lot man, I wouldn't be getting better at this pace without you man, lol put more beats up, I'm running very low
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Atta boy!
This is some wicked sh*t here man. The intro is great and the flow is pretty tight. There were a few pronouciation/grammar issues, but nothing too major. I like the line "platformer embalmer, killin these levels" is that a game reference? To think, a month ago I had trouble listening to your music, now you're worthy of the Ipod. Great progress man, peace
told you battling is great, lol and anything u might think the lines mean they mean that and more. grammar is there for a reason aswell,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
fucking bn
Ma bars r like water boarding
Every1's cool with it pouring
that was all i needed to here man. heres a fucking 10 lmao
-RMP
P.S. you should've replaced "bars" with "flow". i think it wouldve match the theme a lil better. but either way that was a hot line
some lines have common knowledge assumptions, plus water boarding occurs to prisoners of war, lol believe me I choose my words wisely,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Allright
As I told you on AIM, this is your best flow yet on this site. Good work
lol, thanks
AYOOOOOOOO!!!!!
definitely the best track from you by far! your flow is getting better and better with each track you're doin! *sniff* im proud of ju mang!!! *cry* SO PROUD!!!!!!!
yay I made daddy proud=D lmao, thanks man
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.