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Nice intro dude! Really creepy... I LOVE IT!! :| :| :| DOWNLOADDDDD!
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good job

its pretty moving at the beginning, some powerfull padding and an ok kick intro, however the kick is kinda basic (cept for the filtering)

and its kinda slow for a trance at the beginning, its a real long intro.

once everything kicks in its pretty good, i mean since u say its ur first trance experiment i say u did a pretty good job (almost all i do is trance so i guess im a big critic lol) it had a nice fast feel to it, and some weird ambiant sounds but it was overall pretty good.

i heard fruityloops noises, is that what u use? jus wondering.

it moved well, but maybe work on the synths so they sound more trancey you know?

good job
PaNdOrA

Your are sooo awesome!

And it sounded something from Tiberian Sun >:D

Jay 36/10 >:D
And your experiments are good 2 >:D

Heh i was going to 0 you when i heard the start

I HATE THAT F**KING BIRD. But after that, it soon picked up :) I'm waiting to hear the bird again, if i do, theres gonna be trouble. Hmmm, sounds both chirpy and slightly melancholy. Nostalgic i'd say, not sure why tho :)
I've not heard much dark sounding trance like this on NG, so i like this one especially, and the subtle effects are far nicer than the in your face trance i've heard on here. Nice job :)