This is neverland of kate lessing imade remix or more own version of it hope you enjoy / TN
Note! vocal is abit off yes iknow that, i dident really worked hard with that but iupload an final edit of it when my other orginal song project is done :)
not quite out of place
I agree with Kazm0 for the most part, though I've noticed that the vocals aren't really out of sync like everybody thinks. Listening closely to this I have noticed the vocals are actually timed to the off-beat. it's the echo effect that seems to set it off a little. it may be because of my borderline crappy pc speakers, but the vocals are very soft compared to the rest of the song and the bass is a tad overbearing. overall, sweet mix.
Out of Sync Vocals
That's the first thing I noticed when listening, and that shouldn't be overlooked.
That needs fixed, NEEDS fixed.
Another point, don't overuse extended transitions (even when they're samples), the ones that take another bar out of the song just to transition through.
Also, try to avoid using rhythm loops, it adds no originality what-so -ever.
Your snare is tad loud, it kinda hurts.
Honestly though, those vocals need synced, really badly, it's driving me crazy, b/c if the vocals were fixed, I'd give you 9.
I'd give you a full 10 if everything was more balanced, and that nothing hurt the ears for a long duration. The snare(s) at 2:15 hurt. Just letting you know.
Funny enough, the pads were lovely after that.
Nice lead, but it's also rather generic, if you know what I mean. It's a standard saw lead.
Anyways, I don't want to go on and on, so I'll just conclude saying that this piece has potential to be amazing amazing amazing if you work on syncing the vocals, and perhaps EQ/relevel some of the parts.
5/5
8/10
Keep at it.
PS: Quit telling people to check out your tracks in your reviews, it's considered self-publicizing, and people don't really like that.
Well yea iknow the work vocal needed to be fixed, yea some of the loops is kinda high volume, , well idon know actully how else find people to listen.
Nice!
The vocals, are WAYYYY off. But the beat is really sick! Transitions are very professional, and the melody lead-in was very well executed. Loved the use of piano. The break was VERRRY professional sounding.
Beat match the vocals correctly, and you got a perfect song here.
5/5 8/10 < (8, cuz of the vocals.)
Overall amazing mix man! Keep it up!!
yea iknow the vocal is some off in some spots never bother to fix it atm working with more orginal projects, iwas think take away vocal and just upload the song, anyway thanks for come by and listen ;)
I like it
i think its awesome, id like to hear more of your future work. :D
Thank you
Sweet
This is pretty good. The drums seem a bit off in the first 20 seconds or so, but other than that, it's just fine. Keep up the good work!
Also, you should check out some of my songs, especially Fighting To Live and let me know what you think
yea well its call off beat, its kinda hard style thing i will check it out
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