Very Good but not Great
The strong start is to be commended, but the melody is should have hard hitting bass from 0:32-0:44 and 1:37-1:49. After that the melody becomes drowned out by electric guitar, you need to tune the electric guitar on the side to reveal the melody. However you did the song justice with a reminiscent Two-Mix finish 3:47-4:20.
Check out Anipara Club's "I love you! Project" cover. There is a good example of a strong bass performance.
Overall this isn't bad, but it could definitely be better