Nice
Hey, man, you asked me to review a piece of yours so here I am! I like it! It reminds me a lot of my own music when I first started writing. It's got good form, nice chord progression, the only only thing I would ask for is more dynamic contrast. It's all kind of one volume. But that could be more of a MIDI thing though.
And I know what you mean about people not checking it out because the name isn't cool. In order to get heard on NG you kind of have to force your music to appeal to the audience.
Keep up the good work! I like your other stuff too.