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not sure what to say. if you can get this solo into multply instruments, then maybe add a bit of percussion into it. it would be awesome. i'm still checking up on your songs from time to time. this is pretty decent. just kind of repetive. just take what you have learned from making this piece and apply it to a song where there is going to be other instruments overlapping each other. it will work i'm sure. i'll be looking forward to your next song. Kudos!! :)