Quality is top-notch, but...
While production quality has always been perfect with your releases (except the ones you intentionally lower) and concept is great, I'm gonna be honest here and say that all this song lacks is a lead melody. I'm not saying that the melodies you used are bad. I just feel that it doesn't have a strong enough driving force that songs like "The Fancy Duel" & "Siege Of The Spiritual" had. And lowering the volume of the instruments themselves don't help at all and make it more ambient.
I've heard all of your releases on NG Audio so far, and so in my opinion I can say that you've done far greater works. Don't get me wrong, this song is still a good song - but it's not as good as what you already had.
I hope you take note of my opinion in your future works,
~rtnario
(Also, please respond to reviews; when people say something about your work they want to know that the creator took note of it. AKA I've been feeling quite ignored here ._. XD)
UltimaTricksta 
