sweet sounds man

this is real good man.
i really enjoy the harp like sounding playing in the background, and the background sound effects accompanied by it.
the melody is soothing and the beats are calm and clean.

overall decent job dude. :D

Sounds more elctro than ambient.

Soften it up and tone down the spikes then it would sound Ambient. Other wise alrigth for an Soft Electo mix.

Draws into nothing..

A synthed intro is meant for major beats int he body not a synergetic body, you should have rocked your way in, the way you did it made this song too.. YOU HEAR ME? TOO SOFT!!!! bring it about 2 notches UP.