Ok well

awesome

thats great, i thought of a setting standing outside in a large city alongside a long strech of a main drag in broad day light but with no people in sight soon large numbers of angry looking agents come chasing you appear out of no where around corners of biuldings in swarms of black siuts and dark glasses aournd corners of every block just behind you and out of biulding entrances. you running away as hard as you can straight along the main avenue tword the end of the avenue where the bay is. in random places some agents stand observing you on the streets or in biuldings. cars come screeching around street corners behind you driven by angents also agressively chaing you down crashing into obstructions or flipping over with the intent of trying to chase you down and exploing around you. some cars trying to cut you off on cross streets ahead of you but you jump and slide over the hoods or they just barly miss you, some agents getting hit in the process as thier gaining on you. with agents running after you, your running to the end of of the avenue past the final cross road towards a bay, leap with no hesitation down the dirt embankment and tumble onto the dock and agents doing the same you just barely scambling on your feet and into a speed boat conveniently waiting for you with keys in it, start it, steer it away and floor it to make a get away speeding off just in time within arms reach as some agents try to jump on the boat and grab you.
but other than that that was all i got. LOL!

The song is mad at me.

...but I like it.

I especially like the heavy bits at 01:01.

Dont look behind you... O.O '

At about :17 I really like how it makes you feel like someone or something is looming behind you after that its like your running for it. The only thing that is a bit off is the ending....Dont know, it just kinda seems like maybe the person is finally destroyed by the paranoia or something... I can see this song being used for a Matrix m.v. All in all a wicked song keep it up! <3

wow

it not bad its good