Nice. . . but. . .

It sounds like electro break-beat fused with trance melody. Not bad but it sounds more like a pass in some huge trance session.

I liked it

I'm absolutely a sucker for piano and well put-together gated synths, and you certainly did just that. I liked how the into built up to the synths and drums, but the bulk of the song is, however, repetitive. Also, it doesn't exactly fit into the genre of DnB; it sounds more like trance (but that isn't a bad thing, mind you).
Coming from a fellow musician, I must say that this doesn't even compare with tracks that you'll make in the future; you're always learning. With that in mind, keep up the good work!

Oh lord

Wow man, you're going to have to each me this stuff. When the synth kicked in properly at 1:20 I got goosebumps. Very nice work indeed.

Dangerously close to being Trance.

At first I was waiting to hear the drums because it was sounding more and more like Trance... or something similar you might hear in a dance club. The drums started and I must say it sounds a lot like Dance music.

The piano sample sounds stock and doesn't meld all that well with the rest of the samples.

Would have liked to hear more variation in those drums.

Aside from that... the synth was catchy and I liked the sample used for the main melody.

Cheers.

Nice...

... build up, i like the synth that you used, and that piano in the begining brought it all together.

The drums are some of the best i've herd in a while.

And while it's a little repetitive, it isn't boring or overdone.

Keep writing, i cant wait to hear more.