funny..
kinda funny to me how much cursing in here... dont know why 5/5
Author Comments
Beat by S-Rock titled "Ghetto Sh*t"
lyrics:
Gimme a fuckin pig wit an apple in its mouth
N I'ma eat that fucker in a 4th degree frost bite
Ye I fuck heads cuz then I rip em better
They cant stand me hangin I jus make a blood bath wetter
Pig said stop I said save me ya letter
Ripped em so said dont forget sir
Ya glare cant pierce ma metal skin
broken needle is breakin in again at night
Where am I at now look like a ride
I took the coaster when he stopped
I pulled his toaster n his face popped
boy dropped blood, had ma bud copped
said ima get em rocked prick fuck said yeah
too bad you gettin locked so stone cold
How much weight does the ground hold
bet not as much as ya downtown sold
CHORUS
Fuckin bitch do what ya fuckin told
bitch ass muthafuckas heartless fucks
fuck head bustaz so go head test ya luck
I fucks wit ya goin down, run ya shit
Devour ya soul as u dont seem fit, fat fuck sit!
So fuck it snort n oink n squeel fucka
Bring ya swat team peace fuckin lova
lord of the flies lookin like u b headed
give ma stick an end with a soft hit
come to think of it I'm sick, but u twisted
You found the beezle bud shud've missed it
kinda sound like broken needle had em wishin
beezle never fuckin existed for goodness sake
the irony come to think of it I gots wut it take
Give it 2 em straight his face need ironing
Keep that fuckin smerk up n I'ma leave it firing
Just my luck think the butchess is hiring
Ma mind so twisted look like a clothespin
You got that clever I'ma fuckin hold em
And we gon chop n screw it, chop n screw it
Chop n screw it CHOP AND SCREW IT!!!
Broken-Needle responds:
Fuck the police
i dunno what to say
This one is pretty..... Graphic...
haha a lot of colorful language..
but if you put too much emphasis on the cuss words
it just starts sounding generic you know what i mean?
"Give it 2 em straight his face need ironing"
haha i like that line man
anyways yah the iffy is the quality and honestly what Wyze said
your flow changed but you know change and diversity is good
but this one is a little ehhhh you know?
anyways keep it up guy
Peace
d[-_-]b
Broken-Needle responds:
yeah, I can't wait to re-record this, just didnt get to it=( I'll let u kno when it's up tho, thanks 4 the review n support man
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
My thoughts
As I told you, the quality is complete shit. You need to turn down your mic sensitivity, a LOT!
Your flow actually regressed on this one as well. You seemed to be getting better, and this better than your old shit, but your last few songs have had much better flow than this.
You put too much emphasis on the word fuck, especially at the start.
Chop and screw bit was pretty cool though
Broken-Needle responds:
lol, glad you liked it, I'ma re-do it soon,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Its different...
This is something different from ya man. Diversity is good for an artist. The audio quality isnt great but your delivery is fairly decent. Your tone fits the beat. There are a lot of fuckin swear in this fuckin song, its fuckin crazy man.
Broken-Needle responds:
lmao=D thanks man, I'm glad you enjoyed it. i kinda like this song more n more as I listen to it more, I enjoy ma music n glad other people do too=D
Keep it pimpin'
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damn
those guys are pri$%s haha. dude im realizing how much people are gay on this site. The only thing that the one guy is right about is the quality it is pretty bad. but the lyrics werent awful but they werent the greatest either, you got the overall point out. Just work on your flow (something i have to do to). Well decent track man keep it up, oh yeah the beat was hard, i like it ha.
5/5
EMDEE
Broken-Needle responds:
lol, yup but this site does offer some very unique people and it's a good environment to sharpen one's skill=D I like the track myself, it was meant 2 b dark lyrics don't do much of that plus I don't like police, lol. anyways thanks for the review and support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Credits & Info
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2.29 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 27, 2009
- 6:33 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 5.1 MB
- 2 min 47 sec
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