Amazing!

Perfect.

It's very good. The buildup is gradual. But, I like how the song becomes
more and more complicated as it progresses. I don't mean that it becomes more
and more busy. Busy is too much. The song isn't repetitive and to me, it
seems that it tells a story. Keep up the good work!

I liked that

The gradually building up sound at the beginning is awesome :3 i like when songs do that.

meh

it was decent, not something i would ever get to hyped about and im a huge trance junky. u really need to work on ur diversity, make it about 15 min long at least and add in NEW things, not just the same fade in, fade out thing the whole time. It gets really tiring listning to the same things every day and i wish people would have the guts to try something new. i sure cant make music myself, ive tryed but i cant understand the stuff to well, but i do know wut is good and not. so next time, try a lil harder on origonality.