awsome

you had me lost i was just staring at my computer screen good job :)

A little OTT

It's not a bad track, but you need to consider the recording volume - I keep hearing this hissing noise in the background, which isn't good. Turning the volume of the recording down would certainly help this.

With the way that the lead guitar seems overpowering against the rhythm, you need to work on the balancing, as they should be in harmony, rather than the lead taking such a lead over the rhythm. That way, you cna pick up on the occasional duff note and work to resolve them.

It's good, but not quite there yet.

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Sounds good, but it's too loud

This is basically a very nice song. The riff you present here is very good and I hummed along to it even it was the first time I listened to it. Strange. :D

Now why I think it's "too loud": It's not "loud" as in "Turn down the volume!". I could do that myself. No, the background music is too loud and it overpowers the nice riff, which is a real pitty.
It all sounds a bit messy right now, so turn down the volume of the background instruments, this should sound a lot better.

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Not too good...

The guitar was really shrill, sometimes a bit hard to listen to..But overall, it wasn't too bad..Sometimes, it got pretty sloppy, and most of the time it didn't seem to work properly with the vocals, just sounded like two tracks being played at the same time..

The acoustic rhythm was actually really great, and personally I would have much preferred to hear more of that rather than the electric guitar..

The static on the track is way too much...Surely there must be some way to cut out the static a bit..

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Sloppy at times, but great improv

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Score: 8 / 10
Summary: Sloppy at times, but great improv
Review: The second half did really get a lot more sloppy than the first, but that doesn't mean it wasn't good.

It really was a good track, even though you say you used a bad cable, which would explain the static at points. I still think that there are some notes that are a little off.

Reviewing improvs are really hard, as they don't go like regular songs. They usually don't have much structure, and they're, well, improvised, meaning they're not thoroughly planned.

I'm surprised at some of the melodies, one at about 1:30, I think, sounded pretty much flawless.

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