Hmm...

I shall label this a mix between Donkey Kong Country and a robot vomitting. Don't get me wrong, I love a good dance/rave song, but I personally (which is subject to meaninglessness) do not enjoy the sound which comes in at 0:14. As I had labeled, it's like a robot vomitting. Everything else surrounding it has a good to great flow (Yes, keep working on this peice). I really enjoy the beat which comes up at 1:14. I'm becoming a fan of your titling as well as your music.

wow

inspirational..