__REVIEW FROM CONTEST__
FINAL SCORE - 74 *averaged from all judges scores*
LOL. This was simply hilarious. I enjoyed the story and thought your homemade sound effects of wind in the background was pretty cool as well. The acting didnt have very many flaws, but that was because you didnt have too many serious lines to do. Even so, everyone sounded like they really were in a tricky situation of deciding if they should bring this guy in a shiny wheel chair along on their quest. The plot was outright laughable and original as well. Tits and cheetos? Best line ever. I did notice that some of your characters sounded alike. You did include a wide variety of characters though, so it was hard to make everyone sound different I am sure. If you want to make more voices, try twisting your throat around and make different sounds until you figure out how to talk with that pitch. you will get eventually if you keep practicing, I enjoyed this a lot. I also noticed some mixing issues such as a loud buzzing noise at 42 seconds. Well, good job!
- 89
Thanks for entering the contest! *read below to figure out what the other judges said*
NAXSTER SAYS:
Quest to Slay the Princess
Acting 30 / 35
Fit 22 / 25
Originality 11 / 15
Range 13 / 15
Mixing 4 / 10
80/100
COMMENTS: The word turtles was well integrated. The wind sound in the background was mixed in all right. Voice range was good.
STALAGMITE SAYS:
Acting - 22/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 5/15
Range 8/15
Mix 7/10
59/100
It was quite funny, well actually the retard was hilarious! but the other characters were not to interesting also it didn't have much story.
SCRIBBLER SAYS:
Acting - 24
Fit - 18
Originality - 3
Range - 12
Mixing - 9
66
Shrek for adults? I laughed out loud at the name "Sir Sexy Shorts" and the voices were somewhat well done though Galgitesh sounded a little like Sexy Shorts at parts. Crippled guy sounded like a cartoon character which is not bad and I enjoyed the whishing wind sounds in the background, assuming you did all that with your mouth. The story is not original, which is why I referenced it to Shrek, ha. Save the princess, or erm, I mean, slay the princess... Okay, right. Implementation of turtles here was alright, nothing special really.