[Cracked> >shattered; Patched]
You broke my heart.
This is my confusion.
And my resolution.
Dear listener,
Listen to the whole tune please.
R&R, and I'll return the favor.
- Aaron.
Nice sounds. :D
Unique melody. I love the main bell noise you have. And great use of the "portamento" feature. :P It kinda gets a little strange towards the middle, but still keeps it going with a similar beat. I like the ending though... doesn't end to abrupt, but slowly does it. Nice work! Isn't my favorite of yours, but still worth listening to over and over. :)
Thank you sire knight :)
Hmmmm
You know im not really into ambient music, but when you can stand it and just let it be then you know your making it right.
Good
I like the appregiation you have going, but the beginning was pretty shaky and unstable. Some of the notes just sounded like they didn't fit. The rest of the song was fine. I enjoyed it a lot. It sounded a little empty though. Perhaps too much acid and drums blocked out all the sentimental sounding instruments. The song is overall overpowered by the drums. Better EQ'ing would fix that.
It's funny how different your review is from most of the responses I've had from friends and family haha. It seems like it's half and half, some people like the sentimental side at the beginning, and some people like the harder part towards the end.
As for the equalization, I purposefully kept the drums at a higher volume as it is to add to the intensity of the emotions that I was experiencing at the time of the songs creation, but I may have left them a bit to loud, cause it drowns out the main bell melody a bit. I may end up changing that a bit.
Thank you for the review!
- Aaron
Not bad
I understand the concept but in my opinion its just way to repetitive for my taste. You did a good job and I can tell where the confusion part is and its just that...confusing. It starts at 1:36 and it just doesn't fit for me. Its to mashed together and all over.
Good effort but still needs work.
Yes, I can see what you mean about the repetition, most of the changes are very subtle and I can see how the song would cause you to say "Well?" If you catch my drift. It's more an active listening part, and as for the confusion, that was what I was going for.
Thanks for the review my friend!
- Aaron
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DjUntold 
