nice man
this is good man, cant wait till you re record it. good verses yo!
Beat is by Wytenoiz titled "When I wake up"
Sample at end is from Dj-Delinquent's song titled "Talk like a delinquent"
When I wake up
you can tell me wazzup
what is life n wut isnt
wanna tell me? keep wishin
if u wud i wudn't listen
see when i wake up
ain't call heads, no luck
I'm down on a re-up
When i wake up
My eyes wide shut
can't see beyond the dream
I get up on a stream
that fresh to clean
words of rap requiem
tell that to a fiend
exhaling nicotine
See when I wake up
I'ma light up a blunt
But im nappin on the track
happened to come out a rap
Really when I wake up
I wanna feel warm
When I wake up
I hope it's still dawn
I want to see the sunset
Reminds me of death
Caught by the grim reaper
But I'm a light sleeper
At night I'ma dreamer
But I hold ma mind weaker
I'm falling back asleep
I'm back in this dream
This time think I'm stuck
N then I wake up
N mirrors r like needles
All broken n ma feet hurts
But when I wake up
it gon b clean as F*ck
I'm tired of riped shoe souls
I'm tired of wut it holds
I'm tired n when I wake up
I *wont* give a fuck
So when the day come
alarms wont sound fun
The run is all done
When I wake up
I *don't* give a fuck
When i wake up
The sun is mad bright
See when I wake up
I'm kirby on star light
When I wake up
Kirby aint there but i might
its dark and I'm lost
Using ma GBA for light
no start ma game paused
nightmare in dream land
but at what cost?
pretty fair a dream and
a life, can I have yours?
Here have mine
Cuz i ain't payin
If the toll is ma soul
Don't mind me not playin
An eye for an eye
goes the old sayin
I'm empty handed like
God ignore ma prayin
I just want to wake up
But he wont give me that
a smile on like make up
cuz God's clown's aint sad
I just want to wake up
so lets hold hands
I just want to make up
those stories n plans
I just want to wake up
And dance...
...with you...
.....baby....
I hope I don't wake up
I wanna keep dreamin
gta learn to stay asleep n
when I wake up
nothin 2 look forward 2
I'm tired of being tired
When i wake up dude
wont ever need 2 smile
The dream, u gta hear it
been holding on for a while
scared to spill it,
now I dont fear shit
I'm overflowing in style
At least I ain't empty
Cuz then u couldn't send me
A kiss,
n that's all i rly want
But it's just that... this
is tiring n i wont yawn
yawning is contagious
n i'm sleeping alone
gta beat these last stages
N then I go home
Take my hand and lead me
I lost I need you
More than you need me
a puppet on its last string
cant dance if u dont see me
Oh and 1 last thing
When I wake up
I wanna see Nik
When I wake up...
nice man
this is good man, cant wait till you re record it. good verses yo!
thanks yo, glad u like it=D I'll let u kno when i do=)
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Whatever your on...
keep doing it! These tracks your droppin are real shit. Your lyrics are relevant for the listener. Nice use of the sampled sample, it fit your theme perfectly. I'm digging the line about using a GBA for a light source, except... The GBA didnt have a backlight. The GBA SP was the version that introduced the backlight to the Gameboy (sorry I gotta go nerd facts on ya, lol). Keep it real dude, its working for ya!
lol, the tricks on u sir i think u can figure out the punchline from there, but even it was sp im sure ppl wud've known. thanks 4 the support,
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LOL ROBBERY!!!
THAT WAS AWSOME =D
ty sir=D
guy...
Im sure you've done made your friend very proud
Awesome song because:
1-It's coming from the heart
2-This is reality speaking
3-Like i said already you've made him proud guy
Peace
d[-_-]b
thanks a lot yo, but I'ma try my best at making it better next timne i record this. thanks 4 the mutliple reviews/5s/support man=D
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real shit
awesome man, I'm glad their are still people out their that believe in lyrics as the true essence of hip-hop, not ridiculous club beats. Stay up man.
=D thanks, next 1s to come will sound much better btw=)
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.