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it was really good dude

Hello.

Nice nice. I dig it. Didn't expect a PM from you, but expect the unexpected as they say. So... let's give this another go.

1. Interesting intro... like the use of gate on that primary bass. Also like that grimey bass you bring in afterwards. Although... I'd consider that a bit too much bass in the least lol.

2. Ah... looks like you took my advice on the drum sample. Drill NB I see. Sounds more DnB now. But sadly, those drums are being clouded by the heavy basslines and synths. Now that you have the idea, you have to work on your skills in the mixer.

3. Volume is all out of proportion. It's all crazy. Makes it a bit tough to listen to =/ -1 there :( Try messing more with the volume knobs internally and externally. It might help.

4. Things get pretty repetitive. I'm not much a stickler for that, so I'll leave that be. That's how most DnB songs are, anyway. Gotta keep things interesting, though.

5. That's an odd fade out at the end... not the way I expected it to end. It'd be best to leave a few seconds after the bass fades out,so that it'll loop back more smoothly and nicely. Not bad, though.

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Not bad, not bad. Still could be a bit more creepy... but you have the chaos workin'. Definitely chaotic. But with that chaos comes the sacrifice of the volume and the frequency properties... and.. that's not good. :( Now you have the idea, basically, you have to work more in the mixer to get more clarity out of your song. You did pretty well, nonetheless. Keep practicing, mate.

~[IZK]

The apokyklypse... sounds AWESOME!!!

haha, its good