So. This is the first song I've made since I acquired my new computer. I don't know if I'm done with it but I wanted to see what people thought about it so far. I think it's one of the slowest things I've written. It was really fun to make and stuff, lotsa layers.

So tell me what you think. Should I make it longer, add some more parts? or should I leave it as it is, tighten it up and stuff? Also, just what you think in general.