I think this is great as it is. Kinda makes me think of Irish style music

I think it's perfect how it is

It's your song, so you can segway into techno at the end if you want. The ending definitely sounds like you could do that with it. But I wouldn't recommend it. It would sound like two comepletely different songs combined into one. If the techno part used the same melody, it would sound like you remixed your own piece and strung the remix together with the original. I dunno, I think you could definitely do something like that, but I'd keep the songs separate. I do like the idea of transitioning from that ending you have there into something trance/dance/techno. It's already largely set up for you to do just that. If you were to make a third part that was also really different from the other two, and transition the techno/dance/trance part into that third part, it'd sound like a medley of different styles, and be really cool. With just the two parts, it would seem odd. Imagine listening to a song and suddenly it changes into something totally different. Most people would be like, woah, wtf? But if you made a change like that twice, then they'd be like, oh I see what she's doing, that's cool! Okay, maybe my idea is stupid, but I stand by it. Just throwing my thoughts out there for you. As for the actual song you have already, I already told you, no complaints there. Sounds totally awesome. Love it.

Excellent tune!

This is simply amazing, it's both calming to hear yet generally upbeat, pretty emotive and makes me curious! I picture a forest setting when i hear it for some reason. =P

Very nicely done, nice choice of instruments and timing, on the whole, great! ^^