not bad.

I like it. Good for your first song. Although, it is a bit repetitive, so it seems unfinished. If you do add onto it, shorten this part up a bit, because the song builds up and then goes nowhere. Sorry, I'm just trying to help you out...

.:Yeah:.

Wow I would love to live that city it would totally be awesome as long as that isn't an explosion in the first 4 seconds anyway this song is impressive to my according to my taste only thing I can tell you is to like to rethink the beginning cause the the rest of the song is fine but i just don't get the perspective that your tying to come at.Also it wouldn't hurt to make it a slightly bit longer even if it reruns around the same constant beats or you could formulate a new beat, but anyway it's still an excellent song and you should keep up the work!