Not bad at all! good job!
but I think that the song lost too much sense, you know?
But I admire 2 things from this song:
1_THE EFFORT
2_YOU KNOW SIGUR RÓS
THAT'S WHY I AM GIVING YOU (AT LEAST) AN 8
(and also this is my first review! yay!)
And if you think I'm criticizing you, please sorry