Yo....
not your best I think but still pretty solid. Flow was a bit sticky in a couple spots but overall smooth enough. keep droppin' them shits. stay up.
ok so I wrote these lyrics for a song by pezmobile titled black planet, under his request i took it down and after listening 2 this beat by Skullbeatz titled "SB Put me in a Trance" I thought these lyrics would sound nice over it, you be the judge:
So kids I'll take u 2 ma planets
shit its hot up in this rub on sum tits
son fuck up to this I need ya kids
Bop ya head to this like facin clits
Smack ass to pass time in class
no lessons for me miss, u testing this?
Start first on the list finish last w.e its
Fine I make her gimme the I O O like thats right bitch
mine I left her behind to go fo them advanced classes
I got them high grades in Sex ed just b4 bed
See sleepin in class u get 2 pass
make the bitch say oh yes
Drop the test n go for field experience
On a higher plane fuck up bitch
Droped the grade A talk scream at me when the tear hits
make her organs shift to ism change lines to prisms
so mind syallables in wisdom inside all fables of sexism
Cuz fuck bitches im jus playin I'm a beast thats all im sayin
She beggin for 6 but i rhyme her 2 heaven
asphixiate like the weapon is extention cords second
See between me n u I turn her on first thats how come ma flow quench thirst
I aint no vader but I'll take her 2 church cuz bitch has sinned
her prayer was to come out not in so i went 2 her mouth
a life savor for later her beggin actually flipped
The candy dam this rapper ripped like gutting for nicks
cutting for the spirit of 4 5 sippin the hi 5th
Take it down
Lets do it do it do it
N DONT STOP
I do that shit I do that shit
4 HIP HOP
Smack tits as tops drop
Smack her Right on the spot
Go BOOM n then pop
Out of this world rock
N DONT STOP
Lets do it do it do it
N DONT STOP
I do that shit I do that shit
4 HIP HOP
Yo....
not your best I think but still pretty solid. Flow was a bit sticky in a couple spots but overall smooth enough. keep droppin' them shits. stay up.
that beat is hella tight no? w.o it this wud deserve 0 lol, but ye i agree this was weak on my part, I'ma def do this beat right in due time=D maybe even tmrw=)
anywya thanks 4 the review man
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Flow...
It could be smoother...
A little more flow. That's all I got.
i agreed sir, this was 1 take
cutie
sexy bitch<3
make out wif me<33
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.