Didnt feel it

why i didn't :(
- I fit were in some game maybe, just because that electronic horn sound is all you hear in some of those. But i don't ever feel too much from music unless its real instruments. I did actually like the end, it was the biggest rise and fall of emotion in the song

what can help :]
What helps though is more chords or some base line, especially in the beginning (that plain phrase over n over needs some background to it)
Plus jazz shouldn't bind you up, switch it up. have the horn speed up the phrase later, or hold out some notes with the sax, different instruments can make a phrase sound completely different that way.

I don't ever want to leave downplaying someones work, so please, don't stop here! making musc is wonderful I wish i could. keep at it :D

its alright

this one is ok, but i think you should of chosen a different instrument for the melody. i'm not sure what instrument it is, if its a violin or horn or something. But I didn't completely feel the sadness. But you should experiment with dynamics or something, to make your songs more interesting I guess.