Odd...

Haha, you made this in Garageband, didn't you? I recognize the spooky please hang up and try again voice. It is a bit off, not all the parts match up (mostly the drums) and while I assume you were going for the kind chaotic approach, it would sound a bit better if the sounds complimented each other, rather than clashing near the end. After the alarm was just random. I lol'd at that. Keep experimenting with things and work on the timing of the drums. Try listening to some other songs on Newgrounds to get some ideas.

Pretty Kool

You just need to work on the drums a bit, they didnt go with the rest of the song