My take

Absolutely brilliant. Magical, heart touching. I'm a grown man and it made me want to cry. Your expressiveness is a special gift, never forget that. I know I'm a stranger, but I'm proud of you! =) With your permission, I would absolutely LOVE to add some parts to this. Well, let me know what you think. Bye for now

Vocals?

My only issue with the vocals is that they were way to quiet. The instruments were far louder than the vocals, so I couldn't make out the lyrics at all (not that that is really an issue for me, as I tend to zone out when listening to music and ignore the actual lyrics, but that's beside the point) Your singing voice is just fine, you just need to adjust the volume so your voice isn't getting drowned out (unless that's what you were going for, in which case... i don't get it, seems like an odd thing to do, but whatever xP ) Overall I quite enjoyed listening to this piece. 5/5 9//10

this is pretty good

Pretty good song man vocals arent that bad i have hear ALOT worse lol nice job here anyhow! :D