.:Alright:.
"Alright" hears the deal even if this is one of your first song that you made that you should keep up the great music cause this is an impressive song and all i have to say is watch out with the long intros,don't be too lazy with your songs or you will tick A BUNCH of people off so finish the whole song,plus try and develop different Favorite artists and listen to there music carefully for inspiration,and if you do decide to to stop at any point then try and slow the snare(constant beat that constantly plays with every rhythm)and you should decide Trance(My opinion)cause so far your doing pretty well in that genre!