Very very nice..

The only thing I can say is "make a longer version", its really nice.

Very nice. :)

I like, well... everything in this song. :D The saw that comes in at 0:12 really put in a nice trance/techno feel. And i like the reverb to. Overall. Amazing song. But i little to short.

Btw, sorry to hear the girlfreind thing. :(

Im Getting Down To This ;)

Well, its pretty good, all i would do, is change out the saw, for the bass line, to maybe a more generic bassy sound. you can find some around the net for free. i would suggest putting in a hit hat so you get that trancy feel, and then maybe at the climax, introduce a new intsrument (fade it in) and for it to be like some trancy sounding one. just mess around with what sounds sound best. then also at the climax put in a new beat, just mess around with the kicks and claps.

but if this isnt really going to be a trance song. put in maybe a cello or something for the bassline. then find some drum kits that sound more reallistic, and stay away from the trancy drum kits. (if you have FL, FPC is the best for this) and then at the climax put in a choir, with long notes. that compliment the music. i think that a choir should go in either song genre, whether you choose to make it classical/ambient, or trance. (if you change it)

but if you left it as it is, its an ok, track. hope this helps, or that you can use this in the future :)