Hmm its ok for elevator music or something to listen to if your board, id rate this a 6 outa 10 as it kinda reminds me of some oldskool stuff before they got good with some melody, I was expecting it to build up and wham get into some beast tune but it was the same thing all through, would make a nice start to a desect tune.Its a good effort though but defo a bit flat. try some high points in it next time with some different beats as you build it up coz it all sounded the same to me. keep trying youl get there eventualy but your on the right track (;