Cool!

I sort of like this, the Industrial drums are really cool. That hat gets a little annoying at times, especially when nothing else is going on but itself and the percussion, but it's good! The notes sound a little off key to me, but that could just be me, because i am quite hungry at the moment. :P

It sounds pretty good man! 8/10 and 4/5.

it's okay.

kinda repetitive. good but not great.

Good..

Your improving lots man ^^ the instruments are starting to sound really cool together.

The only problem with this.. and its a HUGH problem, is its wayyyyyyyyy to reptitive, you have the same sounds repeating for 2 and a half minutes almost, with no changing in notes or anything.

This really put me off the song quite alot, but it has alot of potential, it just needs to be compacted together, like make those effects at 3:30 come in alot fast, like mabye at 1 minute instead of 3 minutes.

Other then that it is really good, though some of the notes don't match at all with each other which is a bit worrying.. mabye look at some music theory ^^ It will help you alot I think.

Anyway, your getting much much better, don't give up, keep trying! I look foward to you next song, and work on cutting that repitition down!

4/5 7/10

Gettnig better.

It almost has an industrial (Spelling?) sound to it. It works for it for some reason in my opinion. Its kinda groovy in its own way. I wont blow smoke up your butt and say its the best song ever but its not bad. You've come a long way from asking me to review just looped beats. Good to see your finally learning your DAW.

Wyldfyre1

I like the beat

I think it's a good pace since you meant it to be slow, so I won't mark it down (I don't do that for intentional things) and coming from F-777, G-O-O-D inspiration (he seems to be the wizard to which most people go). I can hear remnants of his song; good effects around 3:50. I'm wondering though, did you mean for the whole song to be slow? Because if you ever think of redoing this for any reason, you COULD change the main beat here and there so it's not so repetitive(but that IS the purpose of this) and add an extra couple instruments to make it not just really one main beat. I hope this doesn't seem contradictory, because if you're sticking with this version than it IS good; I'm just giving suggestions for any possible future editing.