WhatAmTheSky

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WhatAmTheSky

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Author Comments

Its kinda short. But it is my first song.

I already have a few more in the making.

So be Honest and tell me what you think

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Dream123

2009-07-31 17:04:07

I liked it but....

Like some of the other reviews i found it to be a bit too repetitive. Try added different patterns to it. It seemed to revolve around the same pattern. Other than that i thought it was good. I really liked the drums. Keep working on it though.

-Dream

ImdoG responds:

Thanks. Yep im going to try to make another version. I do like the song and the sounds so i think i might stick with it for a little while and see about makeing it longer and more diverse.

And if you dont mind, i would like to send a link to you when the next version or song i make comes out. Constructive Criticism is appreciated!! =D

PerfectTheft

2009-07-31 11:39:55

Nice work

I respect the drum beat, but yeah... it was a little to repetative for my taste.
Although, I shouldn't really be talking. :)

ImdoG responds:

Thanks im addressing that now cause i do really like this. It was my first song. But i am wanting to make this longer and better.

And if you dont mind, i would like to send a link to you when the next version or song i make comes out. Constructive Criticism is appreciated!! =D

Step

2009-07-30 04:22:32

Repetitive, but cool :)

Excellent job on the drums. They were a little repetitive in the first part, but the they varied a little more, which was cool. The bass was pretty repetitive, though. Try and add a few more instruments, like some ambientish one and one playing a fast melody. The ending's perfect for a loop, but the beginning was perfect for a song, which is pretty strange. If you want it as a song, you should end it with one last long note, but if you want it as a loop you remove the first 5 seconds of the song. Anyway, for the song in general, a little repetitive, but the drums were really cool, the bass was pretty catchy and the effects were cool. Keep up the good work :).
9/10
5/5

ImdoG responds:

THANKs that really helps. Second "song" in the making right now. Honestly though it was three nights work just after learning the program. But yeah, ill keep what you said in mind.