its good but. ill tell u what needs fixing
It has a nice rhythm and melody, and yes, ur right about adding more sound effects and stuff. But one other thing, try not to use too many presets & try adding sound effects to ur instruments. It would be very good in those games like kirby or something. Good bro. This is just me being very picky on purpose. Haha, funny title.
Did u know that I make techno music too? why don't u check it out?