Great start!

Drums were very well done, especially the drum beat that appears at the end of the song. I think that sometimes, the drums come in to the melody too early though. For the first part, It think the kicks and cymbals should come in after 4 bars, not 2 (starting at 0:07 not 0:03), and the drum beat at the end started too early (better to start it close to 0:50 not 0:46).

The melodies were quite good, and there were loads of different sounds and instruments which made the song enjoyable from beginnning to end. Needs a few more effects here and there though, in my opinion.

The beginning (putting aside the fact that the drum beat was too early) was quite good, and the buildup was pretty professionally done. This didn't loop well, though. There was a little silence after the last note which ruined the loop.

As for the name, it needs a little work. Fits very well with the song, but needs to be more catchy. I'd suggest 'Woken from the Grave', 'Cry of the Undead', 'Death Awaits' or 'Undead Army'. Yeah, I'm a little rusty with names :\.

To summarize, a very good start, and I can see heaps of potential in this song. A little short, so you should work on lengthening it, but it's quite well varied and really good overall. Good luck on it XD.
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