Not bad

Good variation of instruments, and a good intro, and the drums, although are quite simple, aren't bad. I liked the echoey drum thing that came at 0:30.

The instruments themselves are a little strange, I mean, for a dance song. The one that plays at the beginning was quite strange, and the main instrument was wierd. I'd suggest some saw synths for the main instrument.

The structure of this song isn't too good, either. New tunes started too early. Instead of waiting three, six or nine bars till you go to a different melody, try waiting like 4 bars or eight, and it would lengthen your song and make it sound better. Just be careful not to be repetitive.

The ending came in a little abrupt, too. What I usually do for my endings is play the last four notes three more times, then one time with a bass or a plucked instrument, and end it with a bang, or I repeat the main melody of the song one more time and end it with an ending note.

In all, not such a bad song. Has some good melodies, good variation and good intro. Work on that ending a little, some better instruments, structure, and you have yourself a song ^^.
7/10
5/5, since this got 0-bombed badly...

good start

the beginning comes off strong! dont be afraid to let beats ride a little longer, and definitely dont throw so many in at once, it starts to sound like noise