Yeah, I really need to change these lyrics. I came up with them out of the blue just to add some vocal to this goofy guitar melody. I'll probably erase this later, but I want to see what response I get first. And then maybe I'll change the lyrics and redo the song. :P PS: This is the first song I based off a picture I drew, lol. xD
Lyrics are here:
Endless oceans
Starlit skies
Boundless beauty
In your eyes,
In dreams I've seen you
At the edge of the horizon
The silver moon above you,
The ocean glistens like a diamond
Just a blink and I'm beside you
Forever safe within your arms.
When I wake the image leaves me
The starlight melts into the sun
Another memory of you is fading
And another day of life's begun.
Then, when evening breaks I see you
Calling me towards you. I am yours.
Very nice vocal technique!
I really like how you phrased your vocals. Surprisingly, you made the lyrics, despite their simplicity, come to life!! What I'm trying to say is that you have great melodic technique in the way you express your notes in and between every syllable of each and every word. Wow! Just beautiful! 5/10!
- XayberOptix
Hey thanks Xay. I was in music theater for a while....not to mention drama and chorus in high school. I sort of just learned how to express emotion while singing. I'm glad it's effective in delivering the point of a song without me really needing a lot of lyrics to do so. :) Thanks again buddy.
Wow
Alright, your my favorite talented audio and flash artist hands down, boyo.
Aww, well then I'll have to add you to my favorite reviewer list. :D You're awesome. Keep it up with all the awesome comments, and I can't wait to see some content submitted by you! :D
Beautiful (4.03 / 5.00 (+ 0.056)
yes, a very talented voice you have.
I just wanna know what guitar did you use for this song? cause I'd love one like it :P
10/10
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>>Zero
Hey Zero! Thank you! You're awesome thank you so much! :D
This is one of the guitar sounds on my keyboard. If ya'd like, I can make a soundfont or something for it I guess. xD
*huggles* :)
Once again, your voice rings true. . .
Jessismith------>
These lyrics are very pretty. I'm drawn to wonder what picture you were looking at. They must be QUITE the love, you've got there, looking back at you through that photograph. Any person would be a fool NOT to be with you. Enough of my endless ranting though and back to the song at hand.
It's nice to hear yet another instrument in your stuff too. The work you do with harps are amazing. The things you do with a piano are FABulous and now, what you can do with a git-fiddle is spectacular as well. I don't know what else to say without sounding like a lesbian stalking you. So, I guess, for your conscience, I'll leave it at that. Thanks for sharing some of your most intimate moments with all of us, here at Newgrounds.
You are one cool "cucumber". *wink, wink, nudge, nudge* Heh heh heh
Until we are allowed to experience your musical magical wonder, next. . .
.............Take care, be good and keep on giving it to us.period
Pretty please, I mean.
Awws....well, unfortunately it's my character that has hystorically driven people away...not necessarily looks or talent. Bascially in the real world, I cannot thrive. Here, on NG and Skype....it is where I belong. Thanks G. Well(I'll admit) the git-fiddle was synthetic lol....I used my keyboard which I cannot live without. Hahaha, tis fine. It's your personality...you're awesome. :D Aww of course. Always. Maybe so. *laughs* Indeed. :) Yep....until next time. Of course. xD
Super dooper.
This is cool sounding. I wonder how you recorded it. Nicely done. The flow of it is really nice and enchanting. I agree, the lyrics could be made better, and I'm usually one not to care for lyrics. I just don't think they flow with the song as well as they deserve to. What you've written is nice but I don't think it matches the song. Anyway it's awesome either way.
Yeah, the lyrics sort of ruin it lol. And they ruin the tempo and whatnot. xD Thanks Leech. I may need to organize some sort of contest. "help me come up with lyrics for my song" lol. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Jessismith 
