Wow I actually love this

Would you mind if a friend and I wrote lyrics to it and possibly recorded it and put it on youtube?

Good

Its awsome.

Really Good!

This is exactly from Karoshi 2.0!

good

i dont know why this is rated low :P

Need improvemnt,But still great!

Seeing that you are 9 years old I am impressed,This does need alot of improvement though.I liked the beat and the guitarish sound at 2:01.

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Ratings
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Audio:4/10(This sounded good,But lacked variety,You should add more sounds.)

Audio quality:10/10(GREAT!It is so clear and easy to hear!Nothing to improve on here!)

Style:2/10(I seemed to like,But I also didn't,This is not really my kind of music,But I liked the way you made it.)

You should add more variety in the sounds,I understand making music is hard,And I enjoyed what you created,Try some diffrent music types.Hope to see more!!