Pretty cool man!

Definitely an interesting tune. Very industrial! It reminds me of Trent Rezner's stuff a lot. I could definitely see this as an intro to where it would build up to into and jump into bigger and louder drums. Like after this using samples from live drums. I could also here some guitar coming in when the song kicks in full gear. What I liked about this most was the fact that it was in an odd tuning. Was that in a 9/4 tuning? It through me off at first, but once I got the hang of it I really liked that because it's different.
Anyway good job! Please expand.
-Matt
9/10
5/5

Neat

It's cool and all but I think you could use some more melody though =D