My review, your song.

I kind of doubt this is better then the original speed.

Really obnoxious - plain and simple.

Tons of recording clicks and poor production quality.

Random vocals, most of which is not understandable.

Writings simple, only positive thing I can say about this is atleast you have a sense of humour, but it hasn't translated very well into an enjoyable peice.

1-2/5 (I gave a 2 to be generous), 3/10.