This is really more of a epic intro than a song.... It sorta sounds Asian cause i used all sharps and flats ^.^ I think.....
It does seem like a huge opening for something
but it's a pretty badass opening. I personally always love large dramatic openings, sometimes more than the main part of the song itself. Personally I think you are more able to move or influence someone's emotions that way, to add story to the song. You did good, and I think you should consider adding more on to it regardless of the length.
This is nice!
I liked this!!...I like the paths and the guitar sound and the arrangements you did to it. I agree with you in that it sounds more like an intro but like a good intro.
Yay! Im glad you like it! This is a really big diversion from what I normally do. I tryed to emphasize the melody and the time between notes instead of a direct assault of sound. :-P
really boring
I know it might have been made to be epic, I mean I listened to the whole thing and it was not climactic at all. You added drums like almost 2 minutes into the track and there is only a minute left, the drums seemed just more build for something that never went anywhere...
add some more variety more instruments and dont let it just stop suddenly at the end.
make your build up a little quicker otherwise no one will want to hear it
Thanks for the review! Yeah Its not quite finished, but you give solid advice. ;-)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
jickey23 
