Dance?

Its a good song, but I just can't see dancing to it.
[If someone did, it would be a winding down song]
The build up was nice, and the way the melodies fit together was really appealing.
But the little intermission at 1:12 - 1:27 didn't seem to fit into the song.
[The rest was stable, and the intermission was trippy]
It also gets repetitive around the end.
So try adding more melodies, and then I'll give a 10/10 and 5/5.
For now 8/10 and 4/5

[I still think Rainbow Matrix is your best]

Hope this helps,
-Nubby Cakums