It's got potential
You created this in fruityloops?
welll, *searches for news post**
here:
http://blackhole12.newgrounds.com/new s/post/168569
it's the MIS stereo sound font, it's amazing and really makes your music sound professional, soundfonts can be surprisingly good in fl studio,
and when you have enough money I suggest some good East West VST.
I think you should work on another melody maybe with different chords, progressing from what you have.
I liked the harmonics near the end, they were really nice :)
well done with the song, is it your first?
lol I wish i got such a good score with my first xD
anyways, I hope I helped, and if you need anything - just PM me :)
>>Zero123Music