LOL!
WOW! It's got a doubletime speed metal style kick.... I LOVE that. Also, I like the synth (or strings), but with that drum beat going, they need to sound dirtyer, less happy, and smuthered in gain and distortion :), and It's very short. Solid 8 & 4/5.
Please check out my new track, people think it's my best one yet (but maybe thats just 'cause I suck :P).