Wow. This is a perfect rave cover of The Entertainer. It sounds like a formal party breaking into a dance sesh. I have heard the original many times, and no audible notes were missed.

Well now...

Very nice and very fitting for a fair or circus...
9/10 because it needs the rest of the song.

A nice tune, but would it REALLY fit into a rave?

Being brutally honest here. This sounds like the sorta music you'd here in a Modern old time fairground (stolen idea :D) , not a rave.

First things first! You got the synths right. Maybe a little too Trance-ish for my liking, but nevertheless, The synth sounds amazing. I wonder how many different ones you used, I can honestly only hear one. I'd say, critically, to use a bit more variety when it comes to it.

Now, onto my major gripe. Its the kick. I'm assuming your bass kick is on every other beat, otherwise this song would be waaay too slow for any rave.

If you made that kick have a snare and a high hat, with have some sort of breakbeat-ish or DnB charm, I reckon this would go down a treat in a rave. At the moment it just sounds too slow.

Hope to hear more stuff from you soon!
-Darks-

OH MY GOD! LOLOLOLHAHAHA!!!! What comments below!!

What were those to previous people on when they wrote those comments! OH MY GOD I nearly shit my pants laughing! Eating deep fried Oreo's and parents having sex is all they can think of to carnival music! Wow, I thought I had a weird childhood! ROFL!!!!! Good Song, weird reviews.....O_o?????

haha

i said i would write you a review.
SOOOOOOOO........... here goes.
this is the song we shall play to our ebabies.. twill sooth them into innocent slumber... wonderful harmonics like sexy time with Borat yes?
love the whole! the synths are energetic like me and my skype conversations... (ironic sarcasm there, it HAS got energy UNLIKE my covos) and the beat sounds like when my parents do it in the room above myne... great for funking down too !!!!! EAUCH! well... not quite a review, but something interesting to read i am sure.

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