my first try at making music on the computer.i know that its not that good. please leave me a review and tell me what you think. please be critical. if anyone has any suggestions or ideas for me please pm me or leave it in a review.
needs improvement
i'm actually not a huge fan, here. i'm actually thinking your main sounds are way to loud, and there isn't enough bass... and it doesn't climax like it should. think of a song like a mountain... you spend the whole song climbing it... and you can see the top, and your anticipating it... and when you get there (3/4 of the way trough a 3 minuet song, usually) you take a moment to take in the wonderful view... and then you Ski down! Weeeeeeeeeeee!!!
lol
this was the first song that i made on mixcraft, so i knew that it wasnt that good i just put it on to see what people think
joyous
well there was an 8 then a 7 then a 6 so heres my five! have a nice day!
Lacking in... alot.
Well Tristan. No offense but this song seems as if it was built for me to criticize it.
1. It seems rather empty.
2. There is no climax.
3. The last bit seems off beat.
4. 100% MIXCRAFT LOOPS.
5. It included a build up tht did not amount to anything.
Now for the good stuff. You Did have multiple tracks playing. And you had a particular melody.
You said i could be critical. Now i'm going to check out your other submission.
Have a nice day!
ty for the criticism. in both songs. the reason its 100% loops is beacause it was the first mixcraft song that i ever made. i didnt think it was that good i just wanted to get some more submissions on here.
Pretty cool
It shows that you put some work into this, but ppl here (from what i've noticed) are looking for hard hitting base and less intro time to songs. They're a hard audience to please. I think you need some more changes in your song, you have one at the end but 90 percent of the song is pretty much the same. You may have added a little part to it, but it needs more.
What are you using to make your songs? I really like the instruments you are using. Starting at 1:00 what are the two first instruments or synth you are using? Thanks.
4/5 -- 8/10
Good luck in the future!
Fox-Donut
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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