hey

i think you got off to a bit of a slow start but once the song progressed your flow was solid
the singing was funny, it made me laugh
i dont like how you sped up the rapping tho, after singing, and then you were rapping quiter.
i say either rap 2x as fast as the tempo for the whole song, or AT the tempo for the whole song, prolly not both
i think like 25 sec to the first singing was the best rapping for sure, your flow got really good there
on the line "whats the definition of a sin" and after you really got into the spirit
but overall good job dude
i understand this is a hard piece to rap over
i hope you rap over more of me and haywyres stuff in the future
thank you!
Fayde

yessir

real nice, I agree with the review below, there are parts where the beat over powers your vocals. cool ass beat though for sure. Sounds like some shit from the 50's. I also like how you change up the flow after the singing, nice contrast. all in all very good.

Smooth

You put some personalized touch on your lines and flow. The singing at 1:30- 1:57 had a nice feel to it, but I thought it could have used a bit more emotion. Also, the vocal volume could use a little amping. This is a real dope beat, when I tried writing for it, I couldn't get anything that I felt comfortable expanding. Its nice hearing another kats take on it.

Well done man (on the song and the competition, let me know when you're planning another). Even if the competition isnt for a title, its a good way to get the creative juices flowing among fellow artists.

lawl

ill though id listen to this before anything on the radio. i like the back track w/e it ishad a samuri champloo feel idk nice but not my genre still id listen to this before anything on the radio. i like the back track w/e it is. I think the endin could be worked on, it didnt seem finish? idk