Could use a little work

Work on the timing to make it more smooth. 8/10 Good song!

Impressive.

I like all of this. You got my download. 5/5 10/10. Keep making music.

No reviews ?! 0_o

Hello there,

You reviewed one of my songs once, so thats how i knew of your existance ^^.
Why the heck don't you have any reviews at all ?!.
People who make music should be motivated a lot in order to make them better.
Thats how i became better, and that is how you will become better.

This song reveals a lot of promises in you as a music maker.
The music doesn't sound professional by sounds, cause i hear a shitload of unchanged presets. But the structure of the music sure is a good one.
The song is well balanced, and all combined together.

Most beginners just make a bunch of melodies and stuff and pull it together in one song y'know what i mean ?.

This one clearly isnt.
You just need a bit of help i think.
I dont have much criticm about the structure of the song =).
You realy should change the presets a bit.
Atleast put a nice fruity reeverb on them, and a parametric EQ.

A filter would do nice also.
Place a fruity free filter on one of your patterns, and right click on the filter button. then do : Make an envelop (not sure how to describe it.).
You should also download Zeta, Nexus, and vanguard.
These plugins provide a lot of nice synths.

I hope i have helped you a bit.
You sure have a lot of potential mate.

keep going, and dont give up ^^,
Listen to one of my songs (on my account called Endeavour), and imagine yourself you will do better in 2 more songs ;), you will be amazed at your improvement.

Take Care,
Endeavour.
4.21 / 5.00 (+ 0.039)

P.S

Vote 5/5 on your own songs. it may be a bit lame, but its the only way to gain more views and votes and especially, reviews for your songs.
The better ur song is, the longer it will stay above 4.40 score.