Ergh
Doesn't seem like your trying, to much repetition is a bad thing, cut it up to its core samples and I think you would have a better song.
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Started on this a while back, put it on hold to work on another song, then came back to it with renewed interest. It's a bit lengthy, but if you want the gist of it listen to the first minute-thirty of it and then listen to around 4:03 on. That is my favorite part of the song if you dont have the patience to listen in it's entirety.
Throw up your thoughts if you have the chance, I love feedback. Thanks!
Hmm
Trippy, I like it. The idea is really cool and it sounds amazing, but after about 1-2 minutes of it, it gets a little repetitive. I know for a fact that you did add some stuff during the second half of the song, but it's not something easily noticeable.
Try make your song go somewhere (or at least, NOTICEABLY go somewhere).
McPhearson responds:
Thanks for your review man, it's good to finally get some actual feedback on this song. I wasn't quite sure why nobody liked it, I personally thought I did okay and tried to add in some variation. I had some of my friends listen to it before posting and they said they liked the first few minutes of it as well, but not so much the rest. Perhaps my biggest challenge is getting the apex of the song in within a reasonable buildup and yet keep it fresh. I believe that when I hit the peak of the song I drew it out too long in good faith that most people are like me and can enjoy a bit of redundancy if the sound is good. My next song I'm working on I'll try to hold back a bit on that, your review helped me out greatly, thanks again!
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