hey
hey, to be honest, it is very repetive and bland but thats ok because your learning fruity loops. I got a few tips for u. Try messing with the res and making echo and shit to add effects to your sounds so they dont sound always so Fruity Loopish. Try learning more the program before you send more of these.ADD DRUMS :P
anyways, if you need any help learning fruity loops ill be more than happy to help, keep working at it and youll get the hang of it soon
good luck
Nicolas....