I've been tinkering with this simple melody over and over and I've used nothing but Fruity Loops to create it. There are lyrics to the song but I need to complete the song first. What do you all think so far?
Sounds immature
I mean that starting lead makes it sound like a cheap 8-bit gametune. Also, you'd need some pretty dark voice and lyrics (think about someone like Manson) to give it some industrial feel, because it's totally glorious now, no sign of that dying civilization anywhere. However, it's a nice beginning. I look forward to the full version!
Only if I had my guitar... ;;
This is really good
Even with this, you honestly need no lyrics its good as is, but thats just me. maybe release one with vocals, and one without just for me
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